I've been putting together a Program for my Employee Awards Luncheon. It's going to have an Academy Awards theme and I need the following wording jazzed up to fit that. This is where you guys come in cause' you are so talented in this area.
K-here it is:
Stars and excitement are in the air as we celebrate the outstanding perforamnce of, and "committment to excellence", our employees have demonstrated in 2004. Producer of this year's event, Dr. Nicholas Pinhey, would like to thank the members of his cast and crew whose hard work, exceptional creativity, and keen sense of humor, provided the basis for this year's wonderful Employee Awards Luncheon.
I'm looking forward to seeing your talent.